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The Newbie Writing Competition '10! (Congrats To Our Winners!)

Discussion in 'Stories' started by Phantom Kat, Apr 23, 2010.

  1. Joshy

    Joshy New Member

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    Congrats to everyone! I was busy with exam prep, so couldn't vote last week or this week, but I had a scan of them, and they looked amazing!

    And, of course, congrats to Neon and Trilo for winning Round 1 :)

    As for Round 2... Good luck, my rivals! :p
    (Though, after a quick scan, I don't think you'll need it to beat me :p)
     
  2. Raves

    Raves No need for the disco

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    Oh, wow.

    I never thought I'd actually make it through this round, so I'm very surprised that I actually did. While I did abstain from voting round 1, out of competitor's honour, I'll say that your story was perhaps the best among this bracket Neon. Regardless, may the better author win.
     
  3. Neonsands

    Neonsands Iron From Ice

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    I am certainly glad you did make it. I adored the creative aspect of your story. My story had detail, but it lacked that spark that yours had. I got lucky with the voting bonus, or else I wouldn't be in the next round @[email protected] I guess some people just don't like my writing. Oh well, if those guys could please give me some criticism on how to improve, I would be very grateful.

    EDIT: Are we allowed to edit our stories during the competition? Just minor things like a rewording here or there.
     
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  4. Phantom Kat

    Phantom Kat WhatWasOnceIsNoLongerWere

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    Yes, you're allowed to edit your story during the competition. :3

    - Kat
     
  5. HKim

    HKim Head of the URPG

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    Congratulations Neon, Trilo. Your peers have judged you to be the best of this round.

    Good luck in the finals.

    I can't wait to see what happens in Round 2.
     
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    *Claims my 5000*

    Wow, never thought I'd get that much for voting. I thought maybe 2500 or something...
    Congrats to Neon and Trilobyte!
     
  7. Phantom Kat

    Phantom Kat WhatWasOnceIsNoLongerWere

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    Okay, guys, tomorrow is the last day to get your votes in, if you haven't already! ^-^

    - Kat
     
  8. Taras Bulba

    Taras Bulba $CUSTOM_USER_TITLE

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    Ha ha!
    With this post, I will finally have a high enough post count to PM Phantom Kat with my votes!
    No, I don't post very often...

    Anyway, I had fun with the voting. Maybe I'll take the Grader test some day.
     
  9. Hoppyfred

    Hoppyfred Not called Fred.

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    Absolutely not. By bragging I mean the relentless and inevitable onslaught that comes when I walk into my form room on the day an essay is due in. "How many characters did you do? I did one trillion and four! Lol! I'm so awesome," or "The paper I used up for my essay involved the death of two whole forests! That's a new personal record!" or perhaps "I did so many words that Microsoft Word took two minutes counting how many I did! How many did you do? ...Oh, well, never mind. I'm sure that's enough for a C."

    It's as if they believe the length of an essay is directly proportional to the grade/mark. Bunch of idiots.
     
  10. Scourge of Nemo

    Scourge of Nemo bad wolf

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    My favorite is, "The teacher said it had to be six pages or less, so I widened the margins by a half inch on each side and shrunk the font down to size eight. Oh, you did yours in twelve point font? Sheesh, slacker." Someone actually said that to me. XD

    At any rate, I haven't been voting, but a few of the entries have certainly caught my eye. Nice work, you lot. :eek:
     
  11. Zombie Muse

    Zombie Muse I'm Zombilicious

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    Uh-oh... haha.. well I forgot to vote again, say.. if you're not done with the votes, can ya give me till tonight to vote?
     
  12. Hoppyfred

    Hoppyfred Not called Fred.

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    Lol. I wonder if these are the people who will be writing politician's speeches when they are older.

    Can I safely assume that (not having been in Rounds 1 or 2) that I am going to thus be in Round 3? :p
     
  13. Phantom Kat

    Phantom Kat WhatWasOnceIsNoLongerWere

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    Well, it was your birthday yesterday, so I'll give you until tonight. That, and I haven't started counting the votes yet.

    Okay, guys, results for Round Two will be up tomorrow, after school. There's a lot of votes to count (more than last week, awesome guys!), so I can't afford to rush out the results. ^^;

    - Kat
     
  14. ~Near

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    That's what happens when you show people you get 5k for voting. :X
     
  15. Phantom Kat

    Phantom Kat WhatWasOnceIsNoLongerWere

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    Re: The Newbie Writing Competition '10! (Round One begins now!)

    Though people should remember voting money depends on the length of the stories. If they're expecting 5K every time, well... ;)

    - Kat
     
  16. Phantom Kat

    Phantom Kat WhatWasOnceIsNoLongerWere

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    Re: The Newbie Writing Competition '10! (Let's kick off Round Two!)

    Round Two Results!

    1st place: 3 points
    2nd: 2 points
    3rd place: 1 point
    If you voted and had a story in this round: (+3)


    - Deep Mud by Joshy : 1 + 3 + 1 + 2 + 1 + 3 + 1 (+3) = 15

    - Shellos Shocked! by evanfardreamer : 1 + 1 + 1 + 2 + 1 + 2 + 1 + 2 + 2 + 1 + 3 + 1 + 2 + 1 (+3) = 24

    - The Pink One by Taras Bulba : 3 + 3 + 3 + 2 + 3 + 3 + 3 + 2 + 3 + 3 (+3) = 31

    - A Shellos for Fun by ~Near : 3 + 1 + 3 + 1 (+3) = 11

    - Endless Shellos by Ryoku : 2 + 2 + 2 + 2 + 3 + 2 + 1 + 3 + 2 + 2 (+3) = 24

    That means Taras Bulba is our winner! Congrats! ^-^ You get $5,000 and move on to the final round! A big pat on the back to the rest of our entrants this round. :3

    Thank you to our voters! You guys get $3,500! The stories weren't that long this time around. ^^;

    If your name is not here, that means you did not provide summaries for your stories. Your votes were not counted.

    - Minuara
    - sv Gravity 000
    - evanfardreamer
    - Ryoku
    - Katsuya
    - Joshy
    - Omniplex
    - Dr.Stubbsberg
    - Thunder410
    - Neonsands
    - ~Near
    - Taras Bulba
    - sorocoroto
    - Zeferin
    - Jack of Clovers

    Voters, please, when you vote, put the stories in descending order from 1st to 3rd. Do not start with 3rd place and go to 1st or say "3 points" instead of "1st place". When browsing through so many PMs, it gets confusing, and I might accidentally skew the results. If your votes are not in the proper format of descending 1st - 3rd, I will not count them. ^^;

    Here is Round Three!

    - The "Island" Lesson by sorocoroto

    - Through Mud and Water by Minuara

    - The Shellos Crew by The Golden Tyranitar

    - To End With a Leap by Zeferin

    - No Time like the Present by DrStubbsberg

    - Hoppyfred's Grand Adventure! by Hoppyfred

    Correct me if any of these stories were in previous rounds.

    This is the last round before the finals, guys. Voting ends next Friday, June 4th! (First day of summer vacation for me.)

    - Kat
     
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  17. sorocoroto

    sorocoroto Vampire Grader

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    claiming the 3,500 for this round...

    Oh and I love how I've graded two of the entries, currently grading one, and entered one story this round. At least I know the summaries...
     
  18. evanfardreamer

    evanfardreamer Trainer Ordinaire

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    Claiming my votey money too. Gotta say, tied for second in the round is fine by me; especially since all but 1 person voted for me at least as 3rd best.

    And now I can write more stories! woo!
     
  19. Ryoku

    Ryoku Sneaky

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    Congratulations to Taras Bulba! Your story was fantastic, and I actually had to vote it above mine. Also, good job to everyone else in the round!
     
  20. Omniplex

    Omniplex Registered Loser

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    I'm claiming my money. I thought that thought the stories were shorter, they were also better this round than first round, overall.