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Add a sentence or two to each one and you'd be good/

EDIT: Whatever, this is good enough for me as it is. You're in, though of course you can still edit if you want.

 

@Nitro; Edited. Thank you!!

 

Name: Acton Caetum.
Age: 24.
Gender: Male.
Personality: Quite around people he doesn't know, and a complete loud mouth dumbass with his close friends. He's a very serious individual who pursues his goals vigorously. As an introvert, he has the tendency to second guess himself quite a bit. He loves adventure and lives life to learn and gain experience. He learns a lot about himself through his interactions with his pokemon, and battles with other trainers.
Description: Tall, with a somewhat muscular tone. Light blonde hair that's kind of messy, with greenish grey eyes, with a pale complexion. Wears loose fitting jeans, with a loose collard shirt, and work boots. Constantly wears sun glasses because the sunlight hurts his eyes.
Pokemon Captured: N/A
Pokemon Natures: N/A
Park Items: N/A

 

This looks good enough to me. Approved.

 

Figure I should make one if I want to use the park


Name: Juan Felipe Alejandro Cortez Esteban de la Vega Montolla Fuego Martinez Medrano Igesias.
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Personality: Basically a geek/nerd whatever you call them. Fairly quiet but knows what he is doing. He seems indifferent to a lot of things but he has many opinions on things. Doesn't really like getting in fights with other people, but if it is something he believes in he can give a great argument on it.
Description: About 6ft, Caucasian, Glasses, strange haircut, isn't that handsome but he doesn't care. He has a bit of a accent(don't know where it is from though). Normally he wears a T-Shirt and shorts but in the colder places a jacket is always there. He has a backpack with just about anything in it, cards being the most popular item in it.
Pokemon Captured:
Pokemon Natures: Gengar-Calm; Salamence-Bashful; Flygon-Brave.
Park Items: 1 Hyper Ball, 9 Park Balls, 2 Energy Powders, 1 Super Ball

 

Can you add a little bit more on the Personality and Description? Just a few more sentences, and then you should be good to go. Like perhaps what your Trainer is wearing or if he has any stranger quirks.

 

@WinterVines; edited it

 

Okay, good to go now.

 

Name: Airik Taloran Stormgrad
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Personality: Happy go lucky Geek, tho is calm and rational when it counts. Will think of unusual solutions and approach everything with a touch of Scientific Method carefully testing and experimenting before coming to a decision about what to do, however tho if really excited he will through caution to the wind and just act on instinct as the emotion takes over
Description: 5'8" tall wearing a long white labcoat over a bright blue hooded jumper, black 3/4 length shorts and bright green canvas trainers. Always seen carrying a messenger bag usually full to the brim with note taking equipment and Pokemon paraphernalia.
Pokemon Captured: N/A.
Pokemon Natures: Adamant Shiftry, Bold Torterra
Park Items: None.

 

Looks good to me, approved.

 

Name: Meekal
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Personality: Introvert: Has few friends, who he values closely. Intelligent: Loves reading, finding out how things work, and learning languages, both spoken and computer programming. Fairly shy: Doesn't often voices his opinion. Mad: Verging on the edge of Obsessive-Compulsive. Loves all sorts of non-mainstream music, from classical to thrash metal, and a lot in between (e.g. Nintendocore). Speaks with the slightest hint of an Irish accent.
Description: Tall. Dark-haired, dark-skinned, dark-eyed. Skinny. Un-athletic. Glasses. Moderate-length hair. Tends to wear jeans and a t-shirt, with a thick winter jacket on top.
Pokemon Captured:
Pokemon Natures: Cyndaquil, Timid
Park Items: Null

 

Looks good to go. Just one thing, though - the Pokemon Captured category is actually used for mons capped in the Park itself, so Cyndaquil's stats would actually just go in the Natures category. Have fun ^^

 

Name: Jessica "Jessie" Holmes

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Personality: To say it in the simplest possible form, Jessie is a fiery girl. She's typically friendly to all, though she isn't afraid to speak her mind, which actually results in the loss of her friends. She's also very stubborn and argumentative, meaning she'll never give up an argument until her point is proven. While she typically is jovial, she can get seriously angry at others if they hurt her, regardless if it's mentally, physically, or emotionally. Her instinctive nature to take revenge upon everyone who does her wrong makes her a fierce opponent. Yet, because of this, Jessie is extremely loyal to the ones she loves. Of course, getting her to love you is difficult, but, once you have, you have gained a formidable ally and a wonderful companion who will never, ever betray you.

Description: Jessie is about 5 foot 7 inches and has a slender yet fit build. She has long, dark brown, curly hair that she pulls over to one side in a loose ponytail. She has hazel green eyes, as well as a flawless skin complexion. Jessie wears a pair of black jeggings, as well as a pair of red and white, striped high-top shoes. She wears a white tank top, which is covered by a sleeveless, black cardigan. If the weather requires it, Jessie has a red, knit beanie that she can wear, though she prefers not to.

Pokemon Captured: N/A
Pokemon Natures: Adamant Arcanine, Hardy Lanturn,
Park Items: N/A (Will be posted in my regular stats)

 

This looks good to me. Approved.

 

Name: Raff Striker

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Personality: Raff is a joker. He loves to crack jokes at almost any time, and he loves cheering people up. He likes to be the funny guy of the group. But he gets serious when he battles. And is a person who will always try to persevere. He is a strong person, but not really the smartest. But in the end, he is a great friend to have. He also cares for anyone and everyone. No matter who they are, even if they are disrespectful. But he will stand up for himself, and won't be pushed around by anyone. He also loves Pokemon, and hates when people are cruel to them. He is pretty laid-back. And doesn't try to be troubled by the bad things. Instead, he looks forward to the more positive outcomes. If something bad happens, he thinks of a way that something good could happen. Or how he could solve the problem, and make something good come of it possibly. All in all, Raff is a good friend, and a good ally to have for anything. No matter what, Raff always has your back. You can count on him.

Description: Raff is 6'0ft tall. He has a long green jacket, it's clean. And it is a little worn. He also wears a pair of regular blue jeans. And he has a pair of black and green shoes. He also usually keeps his jacket open. Revealing a plain white T shirt under it. He is also tan, but not dark tan. Just a regular light tan. He is also sort of muscular, but not big. More like a Bruce Lee type of muscular. He has long brown hair that goes down past his shoulders. Entering into his upper back a little bit. He also has green eyes with a yellow Iris. He sometimes wears a black fedora. But now always. Most of the time he keeps it in his bag. He sometimes takes it out in heated battles.

Pokemon Captured: N/A
Pokemon Natures: Adamant Corphish(Starter.)
Park Items: Update! I now have 4 Park Balls.

 

Wow, that's one of the best SUs I've seen in a while. Approved.

 

Really? Thanks for the compliment.

 

Name: Hunter
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Personality: Cold and at times rather cruel and heartless, this man is only ever out for himself. He often treats his Pokemon recklessly, though he claims that it will make them tougher. He sees Pokemon merely as tools that can be used to make money and is angered easily by those who go against him. Hunter will often go to extreme lengths to make sure he gets his own way.
Description: Very rough looking, with short black hair and stubble. Quite heavily built, standing easily over 6ft. Wears muddy black boots, black cargo pants and a grey singlet with a brown jacket over the top. Being an outdoors-man, he is also quite tanned.
Pokemon Captured: N/A
Pokemon Natures: N/A
Park Items: N/A

 

Approved, have fun in the Park.

 

Name: Geoffrey Keeper
Age: 16
Gender: Male

Personality: Geoffrey likes to live for the moment and does what feels good at the time, his work tends to be sloppy and careless and he is very unorganised. He likes to think in plain and simple terms. People describe him as down to earth, practical, impulsive and conservative person.

Description: Geoffrey stands at about 6'01'' and is of a medium build. His thick, wavy brown hair grows outwards and is shoulder length, the side fringe hanging around where his chocolate brown eyes are. He is usually seen wearing a plain white t-shirt, a red body warmer and a pair of jeans or denim shorts that hang just below his knees, both of which have large pockets. His trainers are mainly black, with white laces and white soles.

Pokemon Captured: N/A

Pokemon Natures: Gengar - Bold
Charizard - Gentle
Tyranitar – Rash
Metagross - Quiet

Park Items: None as of yet.