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Name: Dagmar Manili
Age: 13
Gender: MAle
Personality: Usually happy and likes making friends. Likes practical jokes. However, can be irritating when mad. He prefers Dragon type pokémon but is still very caring for his Riolu.
Description: Short (around 4, 5) but strong for his size. Hair and eyes are brown. Face looks sly, young children that don't know him often think he is an evil mastermind. Likes wearing black and often wears a cape. He carries a badge inside his clothes, no one knows what it is, and he only shows it to his friends.
Pokemon Captured: N/A
Park Items: N/A

 

Uhhh describe your character a little more. Maybe add hair/eye color. Try to add a little more depth and I'll approve it

 

Ok edited it.

 

Looks better. Now approved. Have fun in the park and feel free to ask me any questions.

 

A lot of people mix this up, but the 'Captured' category is only for mons you've caught in the Park. You can add Pokemon Natures and list the ones you've brought in.

 

Name: Jake Smith
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Personality: Jake is a bold, happy go lucky person who will apways stick up for his friends. Only on rare occasions will you see him scared, or worried about something. Jake also likes to live life to the fullest
Description: Jake is a fairly tall, average weight kid. He has brown eyes and spiky brown hair. He normally wears a long sleeve plain shirt with a dark hoodie. Covering his legs, Jake wears dark won jeans and on his feet he wears blue adidas trainers
Pokemon Captured: None
Pokemon Natures:
Park Items: None

 

Looks good. Approved.

 

Name: Halas
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Personality: Halas is a slaphappy teenager who enjoys a good practical joke. When it comes to battling, his happy self gets replaced with a very serious trainer. He will stop at nothing to win the battle or go down fighting. He gets aggressive when things don’t go his way constantly. He is fearless and run into any fight guns a blazin'.
Description: Halas has brown hair that goes down just to his eyebrows and deep brown eyes. He has a relatively good amount of muscle on him and loves to brag about it. He usually wears a pair of skinny jeans with a black t-shirt underneath. He has a long brown trench coat that he wears over it, but he never buttons it up. He also wears black running shoes that are his favorite.
Pokemon Captured: None
Pokemon Natures: None
Park Items:
4 Park Ball
4 Super Ball
3 Hyper Ball
1 Poke-Doll
3 Energy Root
4 Soothing Fragrance Plus

 

Seems alright by me, approved

 

Name: Mike Hawkburns


Age: 18


Gender: Male

Personality: A relaxed "pretty cool" 18 year old. Doesn't take much that seriously but also has a thirst to prove himself. He is quite shy though, he often feels uncomfortable around people that he doesn't know. He has a you can say obsession with victory and does not take losses lightly. He does not adventure all that often, but rather spends his time training, learning more about the pokemon he owns and strives to perfect his strategies. His hobbies include music, video games and ofcourse battling. He is very fond of his past but at the same time doesn't want any part of it. He's a very mysterious man, but when he sets his mind on something. He accomplishes it.

Description: He's a decently sized man around the height of 5'10, and around 160 pounds. He often wears either a pair of khaki shorts or a pair of blue jeans with whatever choice of t-shirt he can find. He has short black hair and brown eyes and is often said to resemble the famous actor George Clooney.

Pokemon Captured:


Items:
Pokeplayer
Litwick Voice Disc
1x Park ball-500
1x Superball-1000
2x Hyperball-3000
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Acceptable. Approved.

 

Name: Twyla BrainSmasher
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Personality: She is laid back, fun to be around, gets mad easily, reckless and listens to no warning. Likes to read, ride bikes and scooters, cook, and gets on peoples nerves. She is constantly laughing at stupid stuff. In short, she is a young headstrong woman who doesn't like to be told what to do, but is fun to be around to those that know her.
Description: She's five one and very slim with long brown hair, with some natural streaks of blond showing through. She likes to dress in tank tops and jeans, and is rarely seen in something else. Her usually colors are white and blue, she feels they describe her best.
Pokemon Captured: None
Park Items: None​

 

A little bit more on both Personality and Description, please. Perhaps a small bit of history about your character?

 

Okay, approved.

 

Name: zack taylor
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Personality: I'm generally a happy person. I likes to be outside as much as possible. I am very impatient. I love being around Pokemon all the time and I always have my eevee with me.
Description: I have dirty blonde hair and bright blue eyes. I'm 5'3 and I usually wear brightly colored clothes.
Pokemon Captured: N/A
Pokemon Natures: N/A
Park Items: N/A

 

Add 1-2 more sentences to your personality and description, and you'll be good.

 

oh ok here

Name: zack taylor
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Personality: I'm generally a happy person, but when i'm angry or depressed I'm not a very likable person. I like to be outside as much as possible, for example I prefer sleeping in a tent to sleeping inside. I am very impatient, so i can never sit still (reading books are torture). I love being around Pokemon all the time and I always have my eevee with me.
Description: I have dirty blonde hair and bright blue eyes. I'm 5'3 with a gaunt body. I usually wear brightly colored tee-shirts with tan or grey shorts. I'm always wearing a backpack filled with a random assortment of things.
Pokemon Captured: N/A
Pokemon Natures: N/A
Park Items: N/A

 

That's a lot better, you're approved. Welcome to the Park.

 

Name: Caesar Salad (Kaustic).
Age: Nineteen.
Gender: Male.
Personality: Happy and good-natured, though generally quiet. Avoids negativity, usually electing to hide negative emotions and concentrate on something else. Has a very calculated, methodical mental process; though is sometimes prone to over-thinking a situation.
Description: Tall, with a modestly toned build. Long dark hair, and gray/green eyes. Tanned or pale complexion, depending on the time of year. Fond of sleeveless shirts, jeans and boots (and of course backpacks). Always makes direct eye contact when speaking to someone (this includes Pokemon), though others mistake this as menacing or intimidating.
Pokemon Captured: N/A
Pokemon Natures: N/A
Park Items: N/A