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URPG Stories Chat and Feedback

Discussion in 'Stories' started by Galleon, Apr 9, 2010.

  1. Phantom Kat

    Phantom Kat WhatWasOnceIsNoLongerWere

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    Double posting. For shame.

    Grader Testers from now on are myself and EmBreon. If activity jumps a bit, we'll add someone else just in case. Send all of your Tests to us!

    - Kat
     
  2. BlazeMaster

    BlazeMaster Creator of Nathan Castle

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    Harry asks for more on the Length section.

    Never say again that Graders are unresponsive.
     
  3. Phantom Kat

    Phantom Kat WhatWasOnceIsNoLongerWere

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    Hey, guys!

    Princess Crow is our newest Grader! Here, have some complementary chains!

    - Kat
     
  4. Alaskapigeon

    Alaskapigeon The Hyacinth Girl

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    It is with great honor that I present to you your ceremonial grader whip. USE IT WISELY.
     
  5. EmBreon

    EmBreon Senile

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    Whoa whoa. Whips are only given out after months of slavery. *throws pencil and sack of notepaper at Princess Crow instead* GET TO WORK.

    Congrats. :p
     
  6. Princess Crow

    Princess Crow still is not a robot

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    Thanks for the welcome! I'll try not to disappoint!
     
  7. AmericanTreeFrog

    AmericanTreeFrog I eat Frogs

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    Welcome to our small group. Use your devices wisely.​
     
  8. BlazeMaster

    BlazeMaster Creator of Nathan Castle

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    Given that we have an Introduction category in grading, would it be an idea to do a Conclusion one as well? Just a thought.

    Also a section on Characters might be quite good. I'm never quite sure where to put feedback on how good the characters were in a story and it'd be quite useful to have one.
     
  9. Buoy

    Buoy the bug catcher pokémon

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    Conclusion fits well into Battle, because usually that's the climax of a typical Pokémon story. Otherwise, you can just stick '/Climax' with Battle and write about the conclusion there, if you want.

    For characters, it's usually put into the Plot section -- character development and just characters in general. You can also make your own section called 'Characters', I guess.

    The above two suggestions are mainly just if you want to stick to the standard layout. Keep in mind that you can format a grade however you want -- you don't have to stick to the sections already outlined. Make your own if you need to -- it's not against the rules or anything.
     
  10. Alaskapigeon

    Alaskapigeon The Hyacinth Girl

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    I combine the Plot, Characters, and Intro section (and I guess Climax would be in there too). Basically, like Buoysel said, you can set the categories up however is easiest for you, as long as you still write a quality grade.
     
  11. Phantom Kat

    Phantom Kat WhatWasOnceIsNoLongerWere

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    I personally have a Climax section at the end, where I talk about how the story ended, whether it was with a battle or not.

    Sometimes I have a Character section if there was more than one protagonist or if it seems character development was a major point in the story.

    - Kat
     
  12. ChainReaction01

    ChainReaction01 Angry about Outer Heavens

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    I always replace my "Battle" section with a "Climax" section, and then talk about the battles in "Description" if need be.
     
  13. EmBreon

    EmBreon Senile

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    Remember to keep your logs up to date, Graderlings. ELSE YOU GET NO MONEY. MWAHAHA.

    Also, cake.
     
  14. Dinobot

    Dinobot Leader of the Autobots

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    Who wants to do a story deal for me? It's pretty big so I'd offer something really good.
     
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    Dinobot Leader of the Autobots

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    Also, don't forget to grade stuff on TPW guys, just saying ;[
     
  16. EmBreon

    EmBreon Senile

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    What's TPW?

    Just kidding, suppose I'll tackle some things over there as soon as I finish YellowMagikarp's tale.
     
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    Phantom Kat WhatWasOnceIsNoLongerWere

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    Hey, guys!

    Just a heads up: I have rather limited internet access right now, so if any of you are thinking of sending a Grader's Test my way just know that I'll try to get to it as soon as possible. :)

    - Kat
     
  18. Alaskapigeon

    Alaskapigeon The Hyacinth Girl

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    So I really wanted to share this but couldn't think of anywhere else to do so:

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  19. Soulmaster

    Soulmaster Notification King 1111

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    I just realized that a good way to get more people over here is the Writer's Workshop Awards are going on and for some of the graders and other members to maybe sign up as judges. As well as post some stories over there and getting someone else to nominate them if they are good ones. Great way to get the word out.
     
  20. Princess Crow

    Princess Crow still is not a robot

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    I second this, and I was actually just about to post about it before I saw you did. It could help build bonds between the WW and the URPG Stories Section, which we've been discussing off and on for quite a while now. I was thinking I would volunteer myself even if none of the other graders/members were interested in it as well, but I think it would be even better if we got many people to go and sign up.