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Bit short but approved.

 

Name: Samuel "Sam" Stark
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Personality: Bit shy,but want to discover new things.Would rather talk as few times as possible,and he isn't very fond off battling,but still, doesn't mind if it is to catch a new friend.
Description: Tall,about 6 feet,and with a small build,85 pounds.He always wear black,or gray T-Shirts, with a white jacket,a dark pair of jeans,and a pair of sneakers.He has black hair and eyes,and has a slightly tanned skin.
Pokemon Captured: None atm
Pokemon Natures:
Beheeyem - F - Timid
Park Items:
3 Pakr Balls
1 SuperBall
1 HyperBall

 

Approved. You can always edit in things as you think about them, and remember to update when you capture mons or add items. Enjoy the Park ^^

 

Name: Leon drake
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Personality: He's a bit shy and anti-social. He can be quite arrogant sometimes.
Description: Short brown hair, Always dressed up in black sometimes with some red or electric blue mixed in. Wears really dark jeans, electric blue t-shirt, Leather jacket. He has hazel eyes and very light skin.
Pokemon Captured: None A.T.M
Pokemon Natures:
Park Items:

 

A bit longer, please. You should have at least one fair-sized paragraph for both Personality and Description.

 

Name: Kitsu

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Personality: Kitsu is a cheerful teenager who likes cute, fluffy pokemon and shiny things. Her Vulpix was her first pokemon, and they enjoy lots of cuddle time together. However, if someone pushes her buttons she and her loyal pokemon will retaliate angrily. With not-so-cute-and-fluffy claws.

Description: She has shoulder length purple hair which she normally combs into a messy ponytail to keep out of her face while battling. She’s about 5’2” and prefers to wear comfy jeans and t-shirts, particularly those that feature furry quadrupeds. Kitsu’s terrible eyesight requires her to wear black rimmed glasses. She carries a brightly colored satchel which she keeps all of her items in.

Pokemon Captured: Do not has

Pokemon Natures: In my stats

Park Items:

PokePlayer
Gastly Voice Disk
Golett Voice Disk
5 Parkballs
5 Superballs
2 Hyperballs
1 Revival Herb
1 Digital Camera

 

Approved. Have fun in the Park ^^

 

Name: Leon drake

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Personality: Leon is a bit shy and minds his own business. He is quite anti-social and would rather be alone than with people. Despite this he can sometimes enjoy working together with people.
He can be quite arrogant sometimes and only think about himself.

Description: Leon has short brown hair and always dressed up in black usually with some red or electric blue mixed in. He usually wears really dark jeans with an electric blue t-shirt covered in a leather jacket leather jacket. He has hazel eyes and very light skin. He is often seen wearing grey fingerless gloves

Pokemon Captured: None A.T.M

Pokemon Natures: In stats

Park Items:
N/A

Not much more but that's all I could think of.

 

Meh looks fine to me, approved.

 

Name: Taither Aranhar
Age: 23
Gender: Male

Personality: A confident young man, sometimes appearing cocky. His quiet demeanor gives him a cold appearance, but he really cares deeply for his pokemon. Usually laid back, but becomes aflame with ambition when given a challenge.

Description: He has medium length dark hair, and emerald green eyes. He stands just shy of 6 feet, with a sleek yet muscular build. His belt hangs limp around his waist, not actually attached through the hoops of his loose-fit jeans. Pokeballs clipped to one side of the belt. His vest pockets holding a few items, while a small pack hanging off his shoulder carries the heavier and bulkier necessities.

Pokemon Captured
None yet

Pokemon Natures
In my stats here.
Park Items
Park Pass x2
Park Ball x1
Super Ball x1
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Looks good, approved.

 

Name: (Tiberius Dreamsmasher)
Age: (16)
Gender: (Male)
Personality: He is a cold blooded young man who likes to see people hurt as much as he loves his pokemon he cares for no one and walks lone its just him and his pokemon but when he needs to will rise to any challenge that stands in his way.
Description: About 5'11 he is 130 pounds he has medium long brown hair has a black over coat a black belt that hangs down pokeball clipped to the sides of his belt on his face are sun glasses and a silver chain on his neck with a ruby in it.

Pokemon Captured
None yet

Park Items
None, yet.

Pokemon Natures
not yet have

 

Ooooh, an interesting Trainer. Approved.

 

Name: John Shay
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Personality:
-Merciful
-Courteous
-Inventive/curious
-Efficient/organized
-Outgoing/energetic
-Friendly/compassionate
-Secure/confident
-Eccentric/original/unpredictable
Description:
-5'10", 210 lbs
-Born 10/27/1969
-Picture

Pokemon Captured: Nitro's URPG Stats - National Park Runs
Pokemon Natures: Nitro's URPG Stats - Roster
Park Items: Nitro's URPG Stats - Bag

 

You don't need to keep track of items or Pokemon captured in your Ranger SU, unless you're planning on retiring your other Trainer SU and just using your Ranger character in your Expeditions as a Trainer.

Either way, not approved, not yet. You need more than just two dot points under Personality. I want either eight dot points or two fair-sized paragraphs.

 

Yeah, I kind of lazied my way past the Personality section. Changes made, check the original post.

Also, this SU will replace my Trainer SU; it will also be my Ranger SU.

 

Okay, approved now.

 

Name: John
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Personality: Somewhat timid, would rather not talk much,he'll often do a lot of thinking and trace an strategy before attacking,despite being the strategical type of trainer,really loves Pokemon and treat them as individuals,instead of brainless drones as most do.
Description: About 100 pounds(around 50 kilograms), 170 centimeters,short black hair,black eyes,tanned skin,dress up in a "wintery" way,with jackets,and cold wear.
Pokemon Captured:

None till now

Pokemon Natures:

Vanilluxe - F - Mild
Swampert - M - Modest

Park Items:

 

Looks fine to me, approved