URPG Stories Chat and Feedback

Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Dunno about Sigil but I know Mime Jr. is missing.

 

Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

Mime Jr. is on there

 

I don't know for sure that it's on there, but if it's not, it's complex.

 

It should be on there . Might be misspelled. I'll check it out.

EDIT: Brainiac, it's there. You must be blind or something. xP

 

Hey all, I just wrote a random short story, and I'd like some feedback. It's short. I'd just like to know if people think the idea was confusing or if it worked.

Did I mention it was short?

Oh, and it's on PE2K, which is part of the reason I have to make a post about it.

Meet My Evil Twin

 

I did two Sherlock Holmes stories. That was fun, but too much dialogue

 

I did a Sherlock Holmes-style story for the WWC. Too little dialogue.

College classes are very nearly at an end ^_^ Next week. It frees up time for fun things, like grading.

 

DRAGONESS MY LOVE, HURRY AND RETURN TO MEEEEEEEE.

Er I mean, hey there >_>.

 

Oh, funny story. This week I have finals. Next week I have AP prep. The week after I have APs. Then I have senior project. Then I have a research thing. Then I have my freshman year of college. So I'm basically here even less than usual.

 

Can we Ask for a grader here? or is that somewhere else?

 

You can.

 

Then Can I get a grader for my story? In my way It's been a month, And I'm worrie that no one will see it, as it has gone to the second page.

 

Sooo... It's been about ten days since I put this up... I'm not necessarily complaining for a grade or anything, but I didn't even get any comments.

If someone wants to grade this that would be great, but once again, I would love feedback in any form, so yeah.

That is all.

 

Don't worry, I'll be clearing all the stories myself if need be. The other graders will no doubt jump in and grab some grades also, just be patient. ​

 

I graded two stories yesterday and claimed Brainiac's, so don't worry about that one.

 

HEY GUYS

We have two new graders, Akinai and Sharkbait. WELCOME TO THE DUNGEONS WITH PAIN AND GLEE.

 

Let me be the first to say that you both will come to lament this choice. Nemo and Kat are harsh monsters who live only to administer pain. I remember when they were nice little girls, but no more. I feel pity for the both of you.​

 

*pulls out whips* THESE ARE YOURS NOW. BWAHAHAHAHAHA.

 

Congrats Akinai, you'll do wonderful here ^^ And I'm sure you'll be great too, Sharkbait

 

Congrats you too, im kinda jealous i think ive been working on this quiz forever now anyway congrats guys!