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Gone Corphishing (working title)

Discussion in 'Stories' started by WalabyX, Dec 7, 2017.

  1. WalabyX

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    Outline:
    • Intro to Corphish and summary of daily routine.
      • River backstory
      • collecting things
      • cleaning the river
      • suddenly a boat
      • mystery pokemon is dropped from the boat (why?)
    • Meet the mystery Pokemon
      • follow them around
      • they are searching for something (?)
      • interaction with Corphish
      • Corphish shows them his collection
      • FIND THE THING!
      • something happens (?)
    • Leaving without saying goodbye
      • mystery pokemon picked up by the boat again
      • Corphish doesn't want them to leave, so grabs on to the boat as it leaves
      • taken to a faraway place (ocean? lake?)
      • good potential ending point for part 1. if MCR is not reached, continue with other part.
    • A whole new world
      • mystery pokemon is part of a group of like pokemon searching for something (?)
      • taken to the leader (lol prolly dhelmise for the lolz)
      • Dhelmise is corrupt and removes the thing, not showing the lead (researcher?)
      • mystery mon is sad, but Corphish wants to help.
    • The search continues
      • They search the (facility/lake?) for the thing.
      • find it in a pile of debris, thrown away by the dhelmise
      • but something is preventing them from getting it (larger pokemon, natural barrier?)
      • Corphish is hurt, but gets the thing
      • mystery mon rushes Corphish and thing back to (researcher?)
      • Sees it, and learns that Dhelmise was told by previous leader that the River is lost and can never be rehabilitated.
      • the thing proves otherwise.
    • Returning Home
      • They take a boat back to the river, see that it is better
      • All thanks to Corphish cleaning every day
      • begin restoring it properly
      • Happy ending!
     
    Last edited: Dec 7, 2017
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