grading stuff woo

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@Felly; $5,500
  • Unexpected Events (Moderate) -- $5,500
    yay grading!
    one thing I might work on regarding the plot--you don't really need to spend so much time recapping the plot of the story, 'cause the author (hopefully) has a pretty good grasp on that bit. Instead, focus more on why you're bringing up each specific aspect (ie, instead of "Zenith tells her friends about her powers," try "Zenith tells her friends about her powers, which [was a nifty introduction/set up for ___/reasons la la la]"
    sorry okay
    bye
    you're fabulous gurl you keep rocking mkay