ALL HAIL POOGEY

@Marius; $50,900

  • River Devereux and the Secret of the Pyraxian Tribe (WWC) - Strong Moderate - 14,500 (+1,450) = 15,950 + 1k WWC!
  • Spirit of the Dice (WWC) - Moderate - 9,500 (+1,900) = 11,400 + 1k WWC!
  • Tate (WWC) - Moderate - 5,500 (+1,650) = 7,150 +1k WWC!
  • Fashion (WWC) - Moderate - 6,000 (+2,400) = 8,400 + 1k WWC!
  • Tweet (WWC) - Basic - 2,000 (+1,000) = 3,000 + 1k WWC!


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WOW, amazing job clearing up the backlog, Marius! There's such a chill vibe to your grades. The "plot" section reads like a group of spoken comments to the author, as if you were casually discussing things while sitting or something. That's good! When you do this, you're very good at picking apart specific plot points. You can make your grading even better by expanding on your critiques, focusing on making your commentary relevant to how the author can improve in the future. For example, if may be more useful to explain how the author can avoid those plot holes in the future or why a certain issue can be so problematic for the reader. On a final note, it may also be helpful for the author if you take a step back and comment on the story as a whole so he or she gets that more-rounded picture of how well or poorly they did, opposed to only receiving specific comments on subtle points. ALSO, amazing job with these grammar sections! WELCOME BACK! :)


@Lovecraft; $2,420

  • All Washed Up - Basic - 2,200 (+220) = 2,420


Spoiler:

GOOD JOB TO YOU TOO HEHE


Let me know if I missed anything! Make sure you keep on deleting those grades for WWC, and keep being awesome ^^ next wages coming up the first!