Thread: Grader Wages 6/4 - 7/3

it's summer and that means Story & Scolipede Season!

Hanners and I must forget... EVERYTHING.

Smiles: $49,600

• Ruby Red - Moderate - 7,000 (+700) = 7,700
• Once Upon a Caterpie - Moderate - 7,000 (+1,400) = 8,400
• Stumble (WAR) - Strong Moderate - 7,500 (+2,250) = 9,750
• Nonexistence Chapter 1 - Strong Moderate - 10,000 (+4,000) = 14,000
• Metamorphosos - Moderate - 6,500 (+3,250) = 9,750

@Princess Crow; $8,250

• Survival of the Fittest - Strong Moderate - 7,500 (+750) = 8,250

@Elysia; $26,400

• Operating System - Extensive - 24,000 (+2,400) = 26,400

*If I can recommend anything, it would just be to try to keep any sarcastic comments aimed away from the author's abilities. Comments like "do your homework," "have a cookie," and sighing sound about 4.5% condescending. While that's not a lot, why have that 4.5% detract from the 100,000% awesomesauce that is your grade (while possibly discouraging the author)? You have a fantastic, humorous dynamic between the author and your critique, so continue that while making sure the sarcasm is aimed towards your own metaphors and not the author's. Anyway, excellent work as per usual!

@Voltaire Magneton; $2,200

• Daemon Ex Machina - Basic - 2,000 (+200) = 2,200

@Not Safe For Adults; $48,000

• Aone in the Otherworld - Strong Complex - 36,000 (+3,600) = 39,600
• Damnation - Moderate - 7,000 (+1,400) = 8,400

*You really did a number on that first grade! Good job! Strong Complex well deserved.

@Synthesis; $6,050

• Metamorphosos: Part II - Moderate - 5,500 (+550) = 6,050

*YAY! Welcome back!

Ask if you have a question on anything. Great job this round, and keep tanning those lovely booties.

Also, claiming!

Also, will copy when BMG comes back up for me.