Grader Wages (9/1 - 10/1)

hnnnnngh! hi!

even though it's me posting the thread, wages this month are, as always, a collab effort between me and ya gurl smiles! we appreciate you guys so much!

@Ralin; $34,550
dear markus // complex // 15,400
eikthyrnir i. læraðr // strong moderate // 12,000
the trap // moderate // 7,150
Drawing connections in these grades to introductions and endings, important themes and connections, showing that you're personally connecting with the story... really awesome stuff here! Great job on the grammar section of the last grade!

@diamondpearl876; $53,000
day dreaming // complex // 12,000
the child you once called i // strong complex // 17,000
The Witch Atop the Mountain // strong moderate // 9,000
S P O O Ksmiles // moderate // 5,500
absolutely AMAZING grades so far. honestly. I'm so happy we've taken recruited you from WW! The only thing I can encourage is to say more -- you do a critical, thoughtful analysis, but to say more regarding your suggestions. for example, in the last story, what could the writer have done with their writing style, as it is, to morph it into something more befitting of the tone they were going for? Going down these avenues is a great way to provide more hepful feedback to the author and you're on the right path. stay rocking it!

@Nitro; $26,400
2071 // extensive // 26,400
this was a hecking strong grade tbh

@Dash; $10,450
The Clothes of Comfort // strong moderate // 10,450
Thanks for sticking with this one! There was a lot of insightful analysis here, but I would encourage you to explain a bit more how the author can fix things -- instead of just saying how/why the introduction feels empty, how could the author work to make the story feel more fleshed out? Still, this was a solid grade and I'm glad you put so much thought into it!

 

Claiming, promising to grade more :weary: