Grader Wages || 6/1 - 7/1

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Great job this month, guys! With WaR and Art/Writing Collab wrapping up, there's tons of exciting work ahead!

ps let me know if I missed anything + keep your logs updated!

@Menegoth; $3,600
Shellos's Adventure // Strong Basic // $3,600
Welcome back! First off, Basic grades are great for shorter stories, so don't let that freak you out. There was a healthy amount of analysis here about plot linearity and characters, but some of that might be a bit too much for a newer writer aiming for a Simple capture. Failing for grammar is also pretty rare unless the grammar is really, really bad, and typically it's best to send writers back with more to work on than some proofreading. That being said, this was a quality grade and I stand by your final decision. Good work!

@Smiles; $29,700
Rage against the dying of the light // Extensive // $22,000
um yes how did you write this in two days
This is an excellent example of how to do critical analysis of an experienced author. You rock.
Companionship // Strong Moderate // $7,700

@Dash; $2,000
Star Fox // Regrade // $2,000
not much to say here; thanks for re-reading + following through!

@Ralin; $8,000
When Love Blossoms // Moderate // $8,000
Good stuff here! One bit of advice that is totally up to you to take/not-take: when you're going through the plot, you don't have to go through it linearly! For instance, it looks like overall you really liked how the lyrics functioned to open and close each scene, and it might be easier to group the author's use of lyrics separately from the plot discussion, given that their function/efficacy was about the same each time. Up to you, though; just know that messing around with conventional structure is totally an option in grades!

@Elrond 2.0; $5,000
Dancing // Moderate // $5,000
Can I just say that your incorporation of cool anatomy tidbits is one of my favorite parts of stalking your curations/grades
LOUDER THAN LOVE // PENDING // PENDING
leaving this here as a placeholder so I remember why I keep thinking this was graded; don't mind me

 

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